Friday, 14 May 2021

Space station

 

  

This is one of my reading task that I had to do and its about the space station 
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 May 2021 at 11:52

    Hi Ruby
    Im Calais and I go To paroa
    and I was reading your latest post about space it was really liked your post maybe next time add a bit more information.

    Calais

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2021 at 11:50

    Hi Ruby! I'm Miro G and I'm from Paroa School in Greymouth.
    This was cool, I like how you chose about the space station.
    I know that it is the ISS (International space station) but some people might not so you could put that in, you could also add in some more information about what things are.
    Thanks, Miro

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  3. Anonymous21 May 2021 at 12:08

    Hi Ruby, this is really good! maybe next time you could add a whole statement or paragraph of information instead so the reader can get a better idea of what your trying to say. Really well done tho great job!
    -Tylah

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  4. Tereora27 May 2021 at 09:15

    Hi ruby,
    My name is Tereora,
    I love this slide but maybe add some more interesting facts

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  5. Anonymous2 June 2021 at 10:06

    Hi ruby, I like your slide. i liked the fonts and backgrounds that you used. maybe add some more facts and or videos

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  6. Anonymous2 June 2021 at 10:11

    Hi Ruby this was super interesting to read. You could add some follow-up sentences for each fact to make it more fun to read!

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