The Moon Landing
Dear diary
P1 Hi my name is Neil Armstrong. In 20 July 1969 we landed on the moon at 8:17pm. I took a small step but my friends took a big one. My friends put down the flag with me. Next our rocket ship was huge.
P2 The moon landing and going to the moon yay.
It is so important because it hasn't been done before but I said “We choose to go to the moon”.
P3 But it was 50 years ago and there were about 400,000 people worked on the Apollo 11 mission. I felt really scared and happy to discover the moon. When I got on the rocket ship it was cool because it was like me and my friends were floating.
The end.
See you later bye.
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