Wednesday, 12 August 2020

My favourite writing

This is my favourite writing in Term 3. Please read my story and leave a comment.  

The Lost Rails

by Ruby 

I walk into the forest with a twinkle in my eye. I walk closer and it shines like the stars. I looked at it closer and it was the rails and they were so beautiful. I think they are lost in this forest. I will try to move the moss.

I try and try but it didn’t work. I got my family but they didn’t listen so I brought them with me and then they moved the moss with me and it looked so beautiful. So when we moved it we all said that should we keep this a secret or not but we did.so I came everyday and it made me happy really happy and I danced on it played on it sing on it and last of all sit on it. The forest was green and brown with birds,hedgehogs,bunnies and native plants.

When I looked at one of the plants it was a blueberry plant so I collected some for all of us. When i went back to the forest some people were there and it was my friend Luke and he was with his family camping. I went over to them and I said hi and he said hi to.

They came over for dinner and it was fun and then it was bedtime so we asked for him to stay the night. When we asked they said yes so we went to the campsite where he was and we got his clothes and when we got back we went to sleep and it felt good to be asleep.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ruby.
    I like how the railway has moss and when you take it off it is shiny. That is pretty cool. That is all I have to say.
    From
    Mason

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