Hello, Ruby. I'm Lucy from Paroa School. This looks really cool. I like how you did stop-motion animation with your own art. It's not often you see people that actually use something they made! To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could fix the html code because you can only see half the screen. Another thing you could do would be to make your caption longer. Other than that, good job! Lucy
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Hi Ruby, Carter from Paroa School here, I really liked watching your movie, you weren't lying when you said it was really cool.
ReplyDeleteFor some feedback, maybe next time you could explain the story a little or make it a bit longer; since I didn't really know what was happening.
I really enjoyed the stop motion animation style of this video and hope you can keep posting videos like this!
Keep up the good work, keep blogging!
Hello, Ruby. I'm Lucy from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis looks really cool. I like how you did stop-motion animation with your own art. It's not often you see people that actually use something they made! To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could fix the html code because you can only see half the screen. Another thing you could do would be to make your caption longer. Other than that, good job!
Lucy